Growing Pains1200字

　　
　　There are a lot of conflicts between our parents and us. For example, when I surf the Internet in my spare time, Mom always shouts at me instead of comforting me. They are too nervous about my grades. In order to please them, I have to spend three hours doing my homework every day. What’s more, I have no chance to talk with them. I am too tired.
　　I really can't stand. I want to say: I do know the best way to please parents is to devote ourselves to study. However, I also need my own way to relax myself. chatting on line is a way to relax myself especially when I was in low spirits. I hope they can give me more support and encouragement.

　　教师点评：
　　这篇作文，用简洁的语言描述了自己与父母之间的小矛盾，同时，叙说了自己的一些想法，希望能得到父母的理解与支持。可以看出，作者作文工底扎实。能学以致用，许多短语都是牛津版高一模块一才学的，例如： devote onself to (doing) sth.; the best way to do sth is to do等。同时，surf the internet; in one's spare time;instead of doing; have no chance to do sth.; relax oneself; be in low spirits; give sb. more support and encouragement这些短语也用得恰当好处。其中，for example; in order to;what's more这些连接词也给文章增色不少。

　　教师简介：
　　杨桂莲，湖南省洪江市黔阳一中英语教师，中教一级。2004年毕业于中南大学英语专业。2008年获全国中小学英语教师技能竞赛二等奖。辅导学生参加全国英语奥林匹克竞赛多次获全国一、二等到奖；所写论文4次获湖南省二等奖，所制作课件多次获湖南省二、三等奖。注重学生学习兴趣的激发和培养，深受学生喜爱。

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